Clarity
My mind is
Confused
Muddled
Jumbled
Cluttered
Chaotic
Tangled
Mixed-up
Twisted
Snarled
Tousled
Disheveled
Disarranged
Pleading for Relief
Your Domination
Calms
Settles
Clears
Relaxes
Resolves
Dispels
Unblocks
Dissipates
Eases
Declutters
Lightens
Cleanses
And gives my soul
Clarity
Lovely post
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Thank you Very Much. 🙂
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welcome
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A descriptive write. Well done. Chimp taking notes.
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Thank you Sir. Just had a jumbled mess in my head that I needed to get out. So glad that my mess may have entertained you. And you are a very smart Chimp for taking notes. 🙂
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Yes, taking notes and preparing for exams. xoxo
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I write a REALLY hard test. Think you’ll be ready? I accept nothing less than an A+. 😉 xoxo
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This is so cool, where did you get the idea for this sort of linear poetry? Nice thoughts, hot thoughts… Amelia, you really are very, very, clever.
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I didn’t get the idea for a linear poem, I just wrote. I had things swirling in my head, I had no idea what to write, so I just started typing. This is what came out, in the order it came out, first and only draft. I don’t feel very clever, just confused most of the time. 🙂
Thank you so much for your continued support and kind words. xo
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I’d love to clarify a few things with you Amelia 😉
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Oh, I KNOW you would. You wicked, wicked Boy. 🙂
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You wouldn’t want me any other way 😉
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No, I wouldn’t. I love you just the wicked way you are. 🙂 xo
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Love this
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If you love this, you should see all the other shit still swirling in my brain. You might find a real gem in there. 🙂
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Probably
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But you also might find yourself scared shitless. 🙂
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Good stuff! And spot on.
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From reading your posts, I am sure you can relate. The swirling in my brain can only seem to find relief when I am under his spell. It makes me want to stay there more and more often. 🙂
Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Yes to staying there more and more often! It is so freeing to be under that spell… to quiet all the things for a little while.
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Absofuckinglutely! 🙂
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I can absolutely relate! Lovely poem, Amelia.💜
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Thank you. It is quite wonderful and centering isn’t it? 🙂
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It is. I think the understanding, the level of devotion, and the ability to completely lose ourselves (the exterior the rest of the world sees), will never cease to amaze me. It absolutely centers me, and it reminds me exactly who I am.
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Perfectly said my Dear! ❤️
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so, so perfectly captures the reality of being able to give yourself over your love. just beautiful. xo
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Thanks Sweetie! When my life gets too crazy, the surrender is the only thing that will bring me back and center me again. 🙂
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