You and I
I need
I want
I desire
To love
To provide
To submit
I think
I feel
I wonder if
You know
You pulsing through my veins
You feel it too
I say
I hear
I taste
Your name
Your heartbeat
Your consuming desire
I give
I take
I share
My surrender
Your command
My soul
Nicely written! 🙂 ♥
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Thank you Sweetie! Was folding laundry and this smashed into my skull. Left a bit of a dent, but it just blends in with all the others. 😊
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Haha! Glad it didn’t get lost… like all the stuff that pops into my head in the shower. My memory blows!
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The shower is definitely THE thinking spot. I can get completely lost in my head as the warm water falls across my skin. Might need another before bed. 😉
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Powerful and poignant ❤️
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Thank you Beautiful!
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Beautifully precise. ☺
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Thank you very much. 😃
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Love this, Amelia. 💜
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Thank you Sweetie! 😃
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You’re welcome.💜 Goodnight!
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🙂 nice x
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Thanks Ziggy Baby!! 🙂
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Simply, elegantly beautiful.
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Simply, Thank you. XOXO 😊
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*sigh* Just beautiful…
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Thank you so very much, lovely lady. 🙂
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My pleasure Lovely x
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Love this. Happy you have atackled more poetry. As for the shower- love that image too. xoxo
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Thank you very much, my loving Chimp. It’s funny, I don’t think that what I write is poetry. It is just random shit that falls out of my head. Poets, like you, write with so much more grace and beauty.
As for the shower, Got to LOVE that, right? 😉
XOXOXO
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Well good shit falls out of your head. OH YEAH the shower sounds GREAT XOXOX
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You should see what falls out of my mouth sometimes. 😉 xoxo
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So love your words. So very glad to be the “You” in “You and I”. And as always, loving all the thoughts and words that just “fall out of your head” as you put it. You really have a way with words Miss A….
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Oh how I love this and how organically it flowed. Beautiful!
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Thanks Sweetie! I get lucky sometimes that the shit falling out of my head seems to make sense to someone other than just me. 🙂
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Oh whatthefuckever, luck my ass!!! It’s more than luck girlie. You have a voice that is very relatable to a lot of us. I’m just glad you share it!!! 💋
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Kind of like a car crash that you just can’t look away from? 😉
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Very nice sentiment.
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Thank you Sir.
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